DC44 Posted October 27, 2018 Share Posted October 27, 2018 Hey all -Just finished a short comedy film i wrote and directed. would LOVE any feedback if you can give a watch. Its a comedy so supposed to be funny but thats probably up for debate. Anyways if anyone has a spare 10 mins would love any feedback , good or bad. If you hate it, would love to know why and what you would change. Anything would be sooo helpful!Looking for help as a new comedy film maker.thanks guys!!https://vimeo.com/297431570/93f610b809 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yanceycravat Posted October 28, 2018 Share Posted October 28, 2018 Just keep the stuff in the bathroom. That's the point of your piece. Cut the beginning and end scenes. They're totally unnecessary. My 2 cents. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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